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skitty_kat ([info]skitty_kat) wrote,
@ 2009-02-17 15:33:00

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Entry tags:fic, red serpent, remus lupin, severus snape, snupin

Fic: Red Serpent (1/12)
Title: Red Serpent (1/12)
Author/Artist: [info]skitty_kat
Rating: R
Warnings: death, destruction, sex, violence, torture and a gratuitous explosion or two. Yikes.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and associated characters belong to JK Rowling. James Bond was created by Ian Fleming.
Word Count: 2685 (31881 overall)
Summary: Remus Lupin is a spy, one of British Intelligence's finest, and this may be his most deadly mission yet. Armed with only his native wit and courage and assisted by the enigmatic and magnetic Severus Snape he must penetrate deep into Communist Russia to bring down the powerful Lord Voldemort.
A/n: This fic contains illustrations, set in the appropriate places within the text. Nothing particularly NSFW.
Boy, am I nervous about this. Thanks go to [info]drachenmina for the fantastic and speedy beta and [info]blpaintchart for listening to me ramble.



Chapter One: M's Man

For all the pursuers cared, the man could have been a dog; a dog to be hunted down, put down and sent down to wherever his maker judged him fit to go. He was, one could observe, a hunter turned to hunted. A ragged predator who had met with a pack of others and been found wanting.

The Moscow streets were empty. A wash of rain had covered them earlier in the evening and was still gleaming in places; a dirty orange, city gleam that served to darken the shadows. It was an oily gleam that sickened the eyes and siphoned colour from the world, not that much colour was ever evident in these grey roads save the familiar red. The hunted man ran through the seeping patches of light, shadows dragging at his feet. His pursuers knew where they were going and there was no telling for him how many were behind. There was darkness of varying shades everywhere. He glanced round desperately, eyes blurred with sweat. Too many corners, doorways and alleyways; too many hiding places and potential traps. He feinted right before leaping off left, the balls of his feet pounding on the stones. The narrow road he chose was, thankfully, devoid of people. The man took another look over his shoulder, assessing the state of the chase a little more rationally now the danger was not all round.

He was a man best described as dangerous. A tall frame was encompassed by lean muscles and carried with the posture of a man who knew everything that strong body could do and would willingly do it. Grey eyes looked out from under a thick comma of black hair and would just as happily look through you as at you. His mouth would, after inspection, be described as cruel thanks to the mocking tilt it often adopted. Cruelty was most often disguised by a wide grin, though it never fully went away. The man was ruthless and proud. The tilt of his chin was enough to show that. Currently, however, fear was pulling at those handsome features. The mouth tightened, the eyes narrowed and the chest heaved with hurried breaths. This man knew what it was to be the predator and now knew the fear of the prey. Behind him was the pack and their teeth were bared. They had turned the corner too and were howling their pursuit. No guns were fired; they had been told to take him alive.

The river glimmered at the end of the street, a sinking darkness below the surface reflection. A step into there would mean disorientating cold and an uncertain fate. It could be an escape or it could be death. The man was not ready for that much of a gamble yet, not while his legs still had strength. He went left along the side of the river. The puddles were deeper here where the road was more uneven. He splashed through them. So did his pursuers, though it seemed from the sound that they were falling further behind. He allowed himself that trickster's grin but it slid from his face as he realised that footsteps were also coming from in front of him. He cursed. The pack was clever.

Two figures emerged from the darkness ahead, both large and intimidating. The street was too narrow to get around them easily and the reach of their arms promised to be inconveniently long. Chance was that one of them would get a hand on him and then it would be all over and the pack would descend upon him like hounds on a fox and with far less mercy. Hunted eyes darted from side to side as he ran on; the river on the right with no bridges within distance and dark brickwork to the left, repeating and repeating until suddenly a shadow seemed darker than the rest. He dodged towards it and was more than relieved to discover that it was a dark little alley. Blackness surrounded him and he welcomed it gratefully. Darkness could hide him.

Shadows, however, are not picky as to who they hide. A sudden flash of light from a torch blinded him and made him stumble. Even as his hands came up to shade his eyes a massive figure loomed in front of him and seized hold. It was over in moments when the pack rounded the corner. They fell on him with ferocity. 'Alive' did not mean necessarily unharmed. In a short time he was unconscious and being carried off to meet his fate, which was to be a cruel one.

Sirius Black had been betrayed.



West of that deception, the darkness was already sidling in. Autumn was doing its best to stay bright but the shortening days were all too noticeable. A chill breeze sent dry leaves skittering and dancing down the grey London street, against the warm lighted shop fronts and into corners to swirl meaningless patterns with the gathered dust. The outdoor traders had long since packed up, the discarded petals and paper bags of their trade left to join the whirling.

Lupin turned up the collar of his brown coat as he crossed the road. He was of middling to tall height and utterly indistinguishable from the office workers and shop assistants who surrounded him. He had brown hair, brown eyes that crinkled just a little at the edges and a just-noticeable pale scar on the bridge of his nose. A tightly-furled umbrella sat in his left hand. His air and demeanour spoke of an earnest civil servant; five day week and perhaps model trains at the weekends. Anyone would pass him by without a second glance.

Smiling faintly, he entered a building whose discreet brass sign proclaimed it to be Universal Exports. A brief nod to the receptionist and then he was in the lift at the back of the foyer. It had smooth stainless steel sides unblemished by buttons but took him swiftly upwards nonetheless. Seconds later, he was stepping out onto the deep red carpet of the headquarters of British Intelligence.

The secretary to the head of the Secret Service looked up with a smile. Percy Weasley, serious and officious behind horn-rimmed glasses, was a red-headed barrier between M and the rest of the world.

‘The old man’s waiting for you, Lupin,’ he said. ‘Serious business.’

‘Thank you, Weasley.’



Lupin hung his coat on the old coat stand in the corner – God only knew how long that had been there – and pushed open the familiar padded door. It clicked shut behind him, sealing the room for complete privacy.

The head of British Intelligence has always been a mysterious figure, masked behind the enigmatic epithet of M. It is a title and responsibility handed from man to man among the hidden, twisted corridors of the British Secret Service. The man who greeted Lupin, Sir A- D-, was tall and white-haired with a divertingly genial smile. He played boules on the weekends and enjoyed chamber music but his work was done hidden away in his office, organising and manipulating affairs of state both near to home and a world away. His wizarding connections and practices were even more secret but had helped make his tenure as head of British Intelligence one of the most successful ever. His handful of wizard secret agents – grouped together as MI7 (Magical Intelligence, not Military, but the distinction between was unnecessary when dealing with the muggle services) – were his proudest achievements. Papers which passed under those fingers transformed to actions miles away. M was a powerful man and a devious one, not that it showed in those clear blue eyes. He regarded Lupin with a twinkling and paternal gaze.

‘Good evening, Remus. How are you?’

Lupin sat opposite him. ‘As well as ever. Yourself?’

‘The same.’ Necessary chitchat concluded, M pushed a file across the desk. ‘I have a job for you.’

‘I didn’t think you’d invited me for tea and cakes.’

Lupin opened the file. The face that gazed up at him was handsome, with thick hair above a serious pair of eyes. There was a charismatic cast to the face that Lupin guessed would be much more pronounced in person. The lips were full but the mouth had a cruel twist, almost but not quite disguised by the man’s smile. Lupin read the name on the file: Tom Riddle.

‘He’s a Russian citizen,’ M told him.

‘With a name like Riddle?’ asked Lupin. ‘A defector?’

‘His father was English. That’s why he wants to move here, so he says. But we don’t want him.’

‘Communist?’

‘Of course. A powerful one at that. Let him in over here and there's no telling what he could get up too. He's a clever, if twisted man and he has the gift of convincing people. Give him a room full of nice, ordinary people and he'll have them marching on Parliament within a week. And he's not alone either; he runs his own organisation, it seems, known as the Death Eaters.' M raised an eyebrow. 'His choice in names alone should be enough to show his lack of taste.'

Lupin pulled a face with half a smile.

‘He’s also a wizard,’ M continued, ‘and, again, a powerful one too. Given time we’d have a fully-fledged Dark Lord on our doorstep and that we most emphatically don’t want. We let him gain the merest toehold here and we’ll never be rid of the man.’

'I see why we don't want him. Can't we just refuse him entry without the subterfuge?'

M's face turned a little more solemn. 'We suspect that he has some sort of back-up plan for that inevitability. Rumour is that he's already bought some sort of mansion or castle up in the north, which smacks of confidence. I don't believe he will take no for an answer. The little we learnt last time we sent someone out told us a bit about what sort of man he is.'

'The last time you sent someone, sir?'

'We sent Black out there last month,' said M gravely. 'We found what was left of him three days ago. Wrapped in a curtain, of all things, and dumped in the Moskva river.'

Lupin shuddered. 'That's too bad, sir.'

'He was a good agent,' said M.

'He was a good man.'

'We need you to carry on where he left off,' M continued, pulling another file from his desk drawer. He passed it over. 'It seems there is a defector among Riddle's ranks and he wants to talk to us.'

Lupin opened the folder. A photograph stared back at him, black eyes blank on the print. The man had a long thin face, framed with hair that was too long to be fashionable and too unkempt to be vain. Lupin's eyes were drawn to the nose, which dominated the face like a canker. He wondered what it would look like in profile; whether it would be Roman and noble or simply crude and ugly. The face scowled at the camera with unconcealed disdain and suspicion.

'Severus Snape,' M told him. 'He's the man you'll be meeting in Moscow.'



Lupin flicked through the pages. Severus Snape, born of an English father and Russian mother, had grown up in poverty in a small village out on the Russian plains. At some point during his teenage years he had left the village, and his mother, to move to the city. He had been a clever boy; one who should have done well in the Communist system, where a poor background should never hold anyone back. And he had done well. Lupin remarked on it as he flicked through the young Snape's employment records.

'He is brilliant,' said M. 'Extraordinarily clever. But he's nasty too. He was promoted quickly all right; he reported his superiors for their indiscretions, minor or otherwise. And while they got hauled off he got their jobs. Not one for making friends, this Comrade Snape.'

'How did he end up in Riddle's organisation?'

'Came under the influence of one Lucius Malfoy. Snape’s a wizard – we think his mother may have been a witch – and Malfoy was probably the first to approach him about using his magic for “better things.” Malfoy comes from a family of old money and old magic but they managed to survive the revolution. Abraxas, Lucius's father, was a cunning old stoat who knew which way the winds were blowing on that one. Lucius is one of Riddle's inner circle; one of the most trusted. He came across the young Snape, saw his potential and recruited him.'

'For the glorious cause of Tom Riddle?' asked Lupin, his tone derisive.

'Couched in the appropriately revolutionary terms, yes. Snape was, at least, something of an idealist. If he'd been there in 1917 he'd have been at the forefront of the revolution shouting "Death to Capitalists". He's got the sort of intellectual mind that discussed Marxism with Lenin in the times before the October Revolution. So given the chance to really do something suited to his intellectual and magical capabilities Snape jumped at the chance.'

'Changed his mind now, has he?'

'Several years under Riddle's command haven't agreed with him, shall we say. And he's clever enough to have worked out that Riddle is up to much more than he lets on. I'm afraid that youthful idealism rather gave way to a rather jaded adult outlook.'

Lupin flicked through some more pages. 'So we've got a disenchanted - what did you call them? - Death Eater who's too clever by half. Does he know much about Riddle's operation?'

M nodded. 'Apparently. Though he's understandably cagey about whom he tells.' He sighed. 'And for some reason he really didn't get on with Black when we sent him out there.'

'So if we don't get on I could end up dead?' asked Lupin, raising an eyebrow. 'I don't like those odds, sir. If he takes a dislike to me...'

'Then you'd better make sure he doesn't, Remus. We've considered this one very carefully and decided that you're the best man for the job.'

'What's he getting out of helping us?'

'A free ticket here and a British passport. Most of all he wants out of Riddle's organisation. It's the kind of thing that once you're in there's no getting out again.'

'Except in a long box.'

'Precisely.'

Lupin skimmed the rest of the file. There was not much more to learn. Tobias Snape had been a sailor who, washing up on some Russian shore, had ended up in the arms of Yelena Knyaz, the daughter of a formerly aristocratic family (the words ‘possible magical lineage’ had been scrawled in the margin). They had had a son, Severus, but before he had reached his teens the boy's father had left the country and left behind both wife and son. The man lived up in the north of England now, in one of the poky little mill towns that dotted that area of the country. The son had never made any attempt to contact his father leaving Lupin to assume that whatever Snape wanted to move to England for, it was not a family reunion.

'He said that he'll find you,' said M. 'We've told him your sign. You can expect him within the first few days.'



Chapter Two: A Bar With A Reputation




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[info]slashpine
2009-02-17 02:27 pm UTC (link)
Love the illustrations! And the story, although I am having a hard time reading it, because it scrolls waaaay off to the right.

Unless I shrink the text to get it , in which case it's so tiny I can't read it at all right now. Maybe later, in very very good light. *sadface*

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-17 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Hmm ... I suppose it's doing that because of the pics. It came up fine on mine so I guessed it'd work all right. Maybe I should post a text-only version.

In fact: here you go.

Also, fail on IJ for not emailing me comment notifications.

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[info]slashpine
2009-03-16 06:44 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, this story is SO GOOD! Remus, Snape, Cold War, James Bond - a;lsdfkjasdfkljahlh1l1!!!

*calms down*

Like all your work, it's packed with exquisitely researched details ("Yelena Knyaz," hee!) combined with your wonderful sense of humor. I have the most major kink for that combination!

Also, thank you *so* much for the text-only version. I could open that and read it alongside the other version to enjoy the illustrations - so cool. *sighs happily*

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-03-17 02:55 am UTC (link)
How're the other chapters for you? They have illustrations too but aren't so wide. Let me know if you need text-only for them too and I'll sort it out!

And I'm glad you like it. :D Snupin + Cold War spies is a lot of fun to play with!

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[info]drachenmina
2009-02-17 03:03 pm UTC (link)
Yay! OK, you already know how much I adore this story - but now I can see the piccies too! *loves*
Severus smoking in his robe-like greatcoat with the Russian posters is very yummy indeed, and the Lupin/Bond film ones (is the cards one from a film poster?) are also big faves. :D

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-17 05:41 pm UTC (link)
*snuggles you madly*
The posters behind Snape are all genuine (I particularly like the fairly disturbing man'n'boy one) though from entirely different decades.
The cards one isn't a film poster as far as I know, but it's of that style.
Thank you, darling.

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[info]blpaintchart
2009-02-18 03:30 am UTC (link)
No no NO, skitty!

You cannot suck me into a Bond!Snupin.
I HATE Bond, so it's simply not possible.

Except that I'm already hooked and I need to know more. And now

Bloody hell, what great illustrations too! How long have you spent working on this epic?

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-18 05:30 am UTC (link)
Muahahaha... *strokes white cat in evil fashion*
What is it you hate about Bond, anyway?

I've been working on it for ... um, maybe a year and a half. I think.

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[info]hogwartshoney
2009-02-19 08:13 am UTC (link)
How can you hate Bond????

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[info]blpaintchart
2009-02-19 08:44 am UTC (link)
Don't ask.

If you get me started on counting the ways, and providing the reasons, we shall grow old together in argument.

And I'll run out of appropriately rude icons!

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[info]hogwartshoney
2009-02-19 12:37 pm UTC (link)
Humour me. You can always download more icons!

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[info]skree_ratling
2009-02-18 05:21 am UTC (link)
Spies and Snupin? Squee!
The illustrations are a fabulous bonus, too!
And look - !!!!! - extra exclamation marks, just for emphasis!

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-18 05:31 am UTC (link)
Whoa, go easy on the exclamation marks. I have it on good authority that five is a sure sign of madness. *nods sagely*
Thank you!

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[info]kopernik
2009-02-18 05:03 pm UTC (link)
Eeeee, I love this fic already, and there are eleven more parts? Ahhh, delightful.

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-19 09:00 am UTC (link)
Hee, thank you! And yup, eleven more chapters, already written and everything. :D

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[info]hogwartshoney
2009-02-19 06:37 pm UTC (link)
MOAR!!! I'm hopelessly sucked in, and although I scowled at Sirius' fate, I did chuckle at the curtain bit.

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-20 11:16 am UTC (link)
Hee, good good. *holds next chapter just out of your reach and wiggles it tantalisingly* *evil cackle*

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[info]hogwartshoney
2009-02-20 02:15 pm UTC (link)
*"Imperio!"*

Let's get that next chapter up quickly, shall we?

*G*

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[info]moreteaplease2
2009-02-21 02:36 am UTC (link)
I love this!
The pics are great, especially the last one, I have a soft spot for Russsian propeganda art (old college project) and its cracking!
The Bond bit worried me, YES it is possible to hate bond...I do too! But this is just great! Roll on next bit.
Yay!

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-21 02:44 am UTC (link)
Thank you!
I do love the Russian propaganda stuff too; it just has this amazing sense of style. The three posters on that pic are all genuine. ;)
Okay, you're going to have to assuage my curiousity (especially as Chart's refusing to elaborate). Why do you hate Bond? And with Bond, do you think books or films?

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Bond!
[info]moreteaplease2
2009-02-21 03:11 pm UTC (link)
The hating of Bond is quite a common thing! I am not sure it can be explained, I think partly enforced watching as a child with the grandmother, and partly the whole "Bond, James Bond" thing, oh I don't know. The mere mention of it being on makes me shudder.

Book wise, not enough delusional fantasy / magic / make believe for me!
There are redeeming features, the inventions, the Russians! some of the people, like Boris Greshenko (sp?) in Goldeneye and even the music!

That being said, Snape in a tux... Lupin in a tux... Snupin in a tux...drool...

Ps, if I really had to pick, Timothy Dalton, hands down.

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-21 03:29 pm UTC (link)
I don't think I've ever considered hating Bond. It's just something that's always been there.

The books're pretty delusional in their way. ;) Good old Ian "sweet tang of rape" Fleming. Not so much with the magic though. Voodoo-type shit in Live and Let Die.
And yes, the music. *drools*

Timothy Dalton? Hmm, always had a soft spot for him but I think his finest performance was probably in Hot Fuzz. Not to mention Flash Gordon, of course.
For me, Sean Connery. Followed by Daniel Craig.

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[info]bronze_ribbons
2009-02-23 09:13 pm UTC (link)
The curtain line had me rolling, and the illos are eye-catching (especially like the detail on the last one).

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-02-24 02:48 am UTC (link)
Details as stolen from the internet. ;) There's a nice Soviet poster, I'll be drawing that in. That's a nice coat, I'll have him in that...
I love me some internettage.

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[info]red_day_dawning
2009-04-17 02:24 am UTC (link)
I'm already addicted! Even though I loathe Bond. But a Bond-ish snupin, written & illustrated by you - yep, I'm in! I love it. And adore the pics, epecially the last.

Poor Sirius. Wrapped in a curtain! Done in by drapery.

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[info]inkgeist
2009-05-27 12:51 pm UTC (link)
I'm SO excited to finally get to read this! I'm ecstatic over the artwork - especially the wolfish Bond-shot one :D

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[info]skitty_kat
2009-05-27 03:07 pm UTC (link)
Hee, thank you!
I suppose I'd better get my arse round to getting the final chapter up...

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[info]inkgeist
2009-05-28 11:55 am UTC (link)
OMG - would you please? I still have to comment on the other chapters but I got to part 11 and completely forgot there was no 12 yet by the time I got to the end. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH for being merciful about where that part ended.

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[info]venturous
2009-08-23 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Wow! this looks amazing!!!

**bookmarks** how fabulous... intrigue, international adventure, and Snape! :D

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[info]red_day_dawning
2009-08-28 09:32 am UTC (link)
Because I enjoyed this so much here is a rec in today's snapedom. Come and read it, to see what dreadful things I have to say!

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